Tuesday, October 30, 2012

All the Sweets

Part of my spelling each week is to do something called a writing station.  My mom gives me words that I have to put into a story.  For level 4 step 10, I decided to write a poem and the words that I had to use were: pies, healthy, easily, premade, and would.

   This is what I wrote!  Please leave me a comment of what you think.


All the Sweets

By Emma
 
Have you ever wished you could eat all the sweets in the world?

Pies, cakes and premade tummy aches.

Some are healthy, some are not,

Some are cold and some are hot!

Would it not be a treat (don’t you think) to easily eat all the sweets!
 

October 2012

 

1 comment:

Aunt Carol said...

Hi Emma! Very nice, I love your poem!