This is what I wrote! Please leave me a comment of what you think.
All the Sweets
By Emma
Have you ever wished you could eat
all the sweets in the world?
Pies, cakes and premade tummy aches.
Some are healthy, some are not,
Some are cold and some are hot!
Would it not be a treat (don’t you
think) to easily eat all the sweets!
October 2012
1 comment:
Hi Emma! Very nice, I love your poem!
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